Thank you! Fixed.
]]>Interesting.
I haven’t seen briefs filed with 2″ margins and agree that’d be too big for 14 pt type. But the last thing I filed had 1.5″ side margins (the top end of what I recommended) and I thought it worked well, and with my font the line length ends up right where Butterick recommends. But Garner’s recommendation is 1.2″ side margins, and your comment has me thinking about going back to that.
Thanks for weighing in.
]]>One reason that it’s hard to pick out an italicized case buried in a pile of text is that Times New Roman has a very weak italic style. (Butterick calls Times New Roman italic “mediocre” in Typography for Lawyers.) There are other, better fonts with italic styles that stand out more.
]]>Thanks, Philfan.
I agree that underlining has its supporters, including some judges. The 10th Circuit judge I clerked for underlined cites, too. And I also agree that underlining jumps off the page more. But, besides the readability point I mentioned in my post, I think Bryan Garner isn’t alone in thinking that “Underlining bespeaks amateurishness.” (Winning Brief, 3d ed., p. 146.) I don’t imagine any judges or clerks would think less of a lawyer who chose italics, while the same may not be true of underlining, so there’s that, too.
Anyway. Appreciate your comment.
]]>I prefer underlining to italics for citations and emphasis – in my opinion, it makes it much easier to identify an underlined case in a big pile of text than an italicized case buried in that same pile. I recognize that this is the minority view, but I’m not the only one who prefers it. If I’m not mistaken, Judge Shwartz and Judge Rendell typically go the underline route.
Need another reason to avoid substantive footnotes? Waiver.
Also, here’s a 6th suggestion: More (and better) headings. Though, not in ALL CAPS, of course.
]]>I read Wilson differently. It refers to “such an undeveloped state of the law” and “a split among the Federal Circuits,” not “a single lower court judge disagree[ing].”
And, even if Wilson did say that, it wouldn’t support the assertion that your large pile of money depended on, that “it is impossible for a Court of Appeals to clearly establish federal law.”
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