Comments for Black Hat Magick

Comment on Chapter 2 – Whiskey Tango Foxtrot (Part II) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Sun, 11 Oct 2015 23:20:46 +0000

In reply to Nirge. I had not known of that grammatical distinction before, I will have to consider it.

Comment on Chapter 2 – Whiskey Tango Foxtrot (Part II) by Nirge

Nirge — Sun, 11 Oct 2015 04:32:43 +0000

Nice writing so far.
Some minutes before ~ should be changed to A few minutes earlier. Some refers to water or sand or something you dont count.

Comment on Chapter 29 – Case Closed (Part III) by Robert

Robert — Sat, 06 Sep 2014 23:22:34 +0000

Another wonderful story, as usual.

Comment on Chapter 22 – Priming the Pump (Part I) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Thu, 16 Jan 2014 01:09:49 +0000

In reply to Kunama. Awesome. Now that I'm edited up almost to the end, this'll come out regularly until this volume is complete. Plus, I have had more than enough time to get through half of the edits for the previous chapters (so they're nicer to read.) And the other half, coming along. Next ... I just need to actually get the e-book for vol 1 released. Losing my previous host really messed that up.

Comment on Chapter 22 – Priming the Pump (Part I) by Kunama

Kunama — Tue, 14 Jan 2014 11:37:37 +0000

Noooo I’m all caught up!
Found you via an ad… somewhere, probably on another writer’s site. Am intrigued.

Comment on Chapter 20 – An Early Morning Set-Up (Part II) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 00:57:56 +0000

Okay. I fixed the “shirts” to shirt; and I think “Green” although I know that there’s a Green political party and then there’s also Green = environmentalism… I guess it doesn’t entirely matter which in this context.

Comment on Chapter 7 – Turnabout is Fair Ambush (Part I) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 00:55:09 +0000

Alright! Got the dupe and the ARG missing space killed.

Comment on Chapter 6 – Maneuvering for Advantage (Part II) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 00:53:26 +0000

Got the ARG references fixed. I think Word sees that as a place or something (places generally get spaces killed.) Fixed College and Mt. Dew ref.

Comment on Chapter 6 – Maneuvering for Advantage (Part I) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 00:51:14 +0000

There, that should fix up the colleges. Yeah, at ASU there’s a couple seemingly-oddly-named colleges that have extremely similar cirricula. I think it’s because different groups of people formed them and they’re separate so that grant money isn’t shared between particular project types.

Comment on Chapter 2 – Whiskey Tango Foxtrot (Part II) by Kyt Dotson

Kyt Dotson — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 00:49:10 +0000

Fixed, fixed, and fixed! (If I can get all these earlier chapters cleaned up sooner than later it’ll make the entire read easier as I go backwards from the later chapters.)